My name is Kaius and this is my El Rancho camp story and my favorite thing in the camp was the water slide. I really liked the water slide because I like how much speed you can get from just sliding down, it and my favorite thing to do on it is to go on my knees and go down with even more speed you can get with just going down the slide normally.
I like going down water slides. It’s very fun and fast when you go down it I like your camp story it was very interesting
Hi i like how you told me about the water slide,maybe use less and’s.Maybe next time tell me about the picture.
kia ora my name is Tiana. I am a year seven student from otaki college. I like your post .